Posted on 2012-06-21 at 00:00:00
|Meh I don't know, there are several areas I feel could be better.
I tried experimenting with adding the water during the coloring process instead of drawing it with the links and linework. It's okay, but ran out of time and I don't think it's quite right yet. Maybe I'll continue to mess with it.
I questioned what should be in the first panel. I ended up going with something a little more fan-service related instead of something something more subtle. I thought that the rest of the chapter is pretty story-heavy, and there's usually something like this at least once every chapter. Maybe that's just what I wanted to draw.
Example for APStorm
|User: APStorm||Posted on 2012-06-26 at 10:02:49|
|The line in the middle of her lower body seems a bit odd... it's like she has legs all the way up into her bust, even though her hips were obviously lower.|
|User: Lightfoot||Posted on 2012-07-30 at 07:39:12|
(I need to adjust the site so that it lists names)
Sorry it took so long to reply, I wanted to draw a picture as an example.
It's possible it's an anatomical mistake. I've gone through periods of trying to simplify the character in my comics as much as possible, and I probably have bad habits. It could also be that her chest is just making it seem weird.
I'd think the line is her hip. Here's an example of the page where I've gone over her body with red lines, excluding her chest . Maybe it makes most sense this way, or maybe it still looks weird.
|User: Lightfoot||Posted on 2012-07-30 at 07:40:24|
|Can't seem to make it let me post links. The link is up in the author's comment.|